I have a room in my house. My room is very beautiful. I do whatever I want in the room. I sleep there hugging my Teddy bear. I play there with my friends. There is a bed inside my room. There is a cupboard to keep my clothes. I have three dolls to play with. The colour of my room is green. There is also a shelf where I keep my bags and toys. When I fight with my sister, I cry lying on the pillow. When I am happy I jump on the bed. My mother shouts when she sees me jumping on the bed. I have a big Barbie sticker on the cupboard. It is pink in colour. I have a welcome sticker on the door of my room. During my birthday and other festivals, I decorate my room with colourful balloons. I love my room very much.
It is ok ok
Nice
pl. send a short paragraph of if i a house
if i were a House
its ok for children between ages of 6 to 9 not for big students so its ok…..
“I do whatever I want to ” doesn’t sound good for it may reveal some sense of deprivation or strict parents around. Book rack is not mentioned and colourful walls should also be described. Any way it’s ok
Very nice
It’s a nice write up. Keep it up